12月18日
下午第一节课初中外语组老师在初二9班听宋相成老师做“How to improve your writing”公开课。老师问“What do you usually do on
weekends?” 要求学生用一般现在时说出以下活动:exercise, eat breakfast do homework go shopping play basketball
watch TV read books go to bed。1. 写作第一步:
审题,找出文章要表达的中心、使用的主要时态,人称。2. 写作第二步:列要点。用简单的句子列出文章的要点。3. 写作第三步:加细节。给简单的句子穿上衣服(加入时间、地点、人物、方式等。)4. 写作第四步:巧相连。恰当使用关联词句,使文章清晰,上下衔接自然。5. 写作第五步:美化短文。选择好的句型、词句,给短文化化妆,戴上首饰。
范文:My weekend
is very colorful. I do lots of interesting things on weekend.
On Saturday morning, I often exercise for an hour, because I think it is
good for my health. Then I eat breakfast at 8 o’clock. After that, I do my
homework alone at home. On Saturday afternoon, I usually go shopping with my
mother.
On Sunday morning, I play basketball with my friends in my school. I
watch TV for an hour in the afternoon. In the evening I always read some story
books such as The Old Man and The Sea. I can learn something new from them. And
I go to bed at ten o’clock.
I
usually have a busy weekend. What about you?
书面表达写作技巧(writing
skills):1.审 2.列 3.加 4.连5.美
第二节课在办公室进行热烈的讨论。
李桂玲
老师发言:对宋老师的课进行了充分的肯定,十一节充实实用的课。
刘晓丽
老师发言:课堂时间有限,可以删掉一般将来时作文,只练习一般现在时和一般过去时的作文练习,效果会更好。